Just updating her face to the new art style I'm going with. There's not much of a change but it's there :3
Sunday, August 13, 2023
Writing sample of Rebecca
Writing Sample of Rebecca:
POV "I don't love you."
POV "I'm never going to love you."
POV "It's over."
"She stares at me with hollow eyes as she thinks over what I've said."
Rebecca "No..."
Rebecca "You're wrong..."
POV "You know I'm not."
Rebecca "YOURE WRONG!"
"I'm started as Rebecca starts screaming all of a sudden."
Rebecca "YOUR WRONG! YOUR WRONG! YOUR WRONG!"
Rebecca "ALL OF THIS NEEDS TO MEAN SOMETHING!"
Rebecca "ALL OF THIS PAIN NEEDS TO HAVE REASON!"
Rebecca "Cause if it doesn't..."
"Her eyes look dead with rage."
"I find myself shrinking into myself from fear."
Rebecca "Then..."
"She thinks it over carefully."
Rebecca "Then you deserve to feel as horrible as I do."
"I start to regret breaking her illusion of hope."
"She starts to laugh to herself."
Rebecca "You're right..."
Rebecca "What was I thinking."
Rebecca "This isn't going to get better."
Rebecca "Theres no saving this."
Rebecca "You ruined it all!"
Rebecca "You're..."
"She can barely put her thoughts together."
Rebecca "You need to pay for all this."
Damien Animations
Damien's animation!
So since it deals with hypnosis, I added a "Help" button and there's a trigger in there to use it if you happen you get hypnotized. Where it will then relocate the game to make Damien say time to wake up 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, awake
Endings
Oh I also went through the majority of all endings so that instead of being blank when locked, they are dimmed making it easier for you guys to look them up in guides later on. Like with what I did for Unknown. Still got a few more characters to do this with but most of them have it now.
Update
I haven't announced in a while so I thought I'd share a bit of what I'm up to.
One of the things I did was went through David's route and changed all this sprites to reflect what time of day it is (so he's not bright against a dark background) Now that I think about it I wonder if there are other areas of the game that need this.... >.> I just know that David looks quite bright against these backgrounds in particular as there are no street lamps. The paramedic is going to need the same expression.
Endings
Mark's route ended up with 34 endings! o.o
I wonder how many endings the game has right now as a whole 🤔
34 + 28 + 21 + 53 + 9 + 22 + 15 + 21 = 203 endings in total so far.
Some Statistics
Statistics:
The game contains 33,033 dialogue blocks, containing 278,763 words and 1,393,479 characters, for an average of 8.4 words and 42 characters per block. The game contains 609 menus, 1,386 images, and 385 screens.
WIP CG Damien
NSFW spoiler
it's like just an outline but one of his more sexier cg's. lmao I always ask myself this when drawing these images. "When the characters getting a blow job what the hell does he do with his arms. Make shadow puppets?!" xD anyway they are stuck off to the sides all awkwardly atm. XD
I just haven't shown any art in a while and wanted to show you guys a little some'ng some'ng~
Writing Progress Chart
Figured it's about time to update the graphs with the current progress.
Just got all of Damien's SFX, Voice lines, Status (Sanity, hp, love) Special effects, Transforms, and assets completed. Just music and ambience left to go and then play testing him for errors. So little yet so much lol
Maybe I should make a polished graph for you guys. I have a check list but it's hard to read...
Damien writing sample
Damien's chapter is finally completely written after I finish this one last sex scene!
Here's a snippet from the last bit of work I have left on him (you know... before art SFX, Sprites etc). It's the hypnosis play scene
"My eyes grow wide as he pulls his erect cock out and my body moves on it's own towards it."
"My lips wrap around his dick as if they were magnetically drawn together."
"Immediately I start to suck it."
"he moans heavenly."
Damien "Good girl/boy/pet!"
"I want to pull myself away from him but the urge to keep his dick in my mouth is too compelling."
"He pets my hair lovingly as I continue to wrap my lips around him and suck as if it's a pacifier."
Damien "You're so obedient now."
Damien "It suits you."
Player "Mmmhpmmff mmphmm!"
Damien "Now now [your name]."
Damien "Don't talk with your mouth full."
Player "MmmHHHmmpphh!!!!"
Poster print
Image is a spoiler:
Got one of my old posters printed as a test to see how it would look and got to say, not bad. But Gloss is definitely the preferred from now on.